MY TRENCH DIARY
WALT describe using our senses
I can see gun,shells it is so horrible.I can see Rats the size of cats and the rats eat all of our food it’s just so horrible. I can see the dark air all of the barbed wire and mud in no man's land. And the dark clouds.
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I can not hear anything because the guns are deafening are making noises so I can hardly hear anything but I can the voices of the men that are in so much pain.
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I can taste mold and dirt from the biscuits and cakes that have been sent to me and the food that the army prepared for us taste not that bad but I still hate it.
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I can smell the mud and blood. The is like being in gas but it is not killing you. I can smell the gunpowder. I Can smell all of the moldy food as the rats eat it.
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I can feel my rifle as I grip in my hands. It feels so smooth and as I grip my pen I still can't believe that there is still ink in it.
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The only thing that I like is the fact that I can see my friends but I like nothing else because it's just so bad here I regret coming here.
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I am thinking of home where it is so wonderful and peaceful. But here it's just the apposite
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We did this because it was near ANZAC day.
We had to make our self feel like we were at war it was not that hard.
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